Jamie Falcon

Seriously an amazing song. The only critical thing I have to say, has pretty much already been said -- ditch the farm animals. =] Well, at least the chicken. Maybe ...

yayyy, so I proofread it or whatever! and I must say that I really like it, and I want MORE. =D --JF.

Thought it was interesting, too lazy to go all into the whole critiquing grammar and such, unless you want that? You can PM me, and I will. I am very ...

Usually, having music on just distracts me. It has to be like, dead silent, so that I can think. I do , however, listen to music directly before writing -- ...

I just watched the story on the news, and ahhh, it's sad. It feels so weird when a celbirty dies, I mean, I always feel like they're going to live ...

I would run away from whoever was making me make that horrible decision. What would you do if your toes fell off?

6/10 I like how the words are cut out of a magazine. =D

I really liked this poem a lot. ._. I thought it was beautiful. Of course, I know next to nothing about poetry, so I cannot give any con-crit. Still, a ...

HAHA uhm. I don't know. Red, because it's my favorite color. What would you do if a giant mint chocolate chip ice cream cone ran up to you and licked ...

This was an extremely interesting read. I don't have to correct much, seeing as several people above me have done so already. I'm just wondering if this really fits into ...

I liked this piece a lot. I thought it was beautiful. I don't have too much con-crit to give. That way you can hear the echoes of the bangs as ...

7/10: Sounds cool, though it reminds me a lot of Scott Westerfeld's books [Uglies trilogy, Midnighters , etc...]. If you wrote it, I'd read it! Comedic Short Story: A young ...

Personally, I have some issues writing if I'm not writing two thigns at once! =D By doing so my brain is constantly producing ideas, and somehow, it'll help me better ...

Four drafts is the most I've ever done on a story, and looking back, it was still a pretty horrible story. :] So now the only time I do more ...

I agree with SeraphTree that you need to get into his head more, and show some more depth with your character. I was very confused throughout the piece, mainly because ...